Monday, January 29, 2007

 

Effective E-mail Sales Copies

I happen to received this email...which was I thought had a strong intro for "high-inertia"people like me who probably form at least 80% of all audiences.

However I felt that the writer failed to develop on this strong intro.

  1. Having a powerful start...one should tone down and sound really logical and rational...don't pile the rhetoric on more rhetoric. Somewhere it must start sounding sincere and real.
  2. Links are introduced too early. When you ask someone to open a link, it's a call for action.
In a world where people fear being spammed or virus infected a higher level of trust should be first established. Check out this yourself and let us and let us have your comments.

-----Original Message-----
From : Google Wealth Wizard [mailto:xx@xxxxx]
Sent : Monday, January 29, 2007 12:19 PM
To : alexhar@singnet.com.sg
Subject: Incredible! GET RICH GOOGLE WEALTH WIZARD

Do You Know That...As You're Reading This,

There Is An "Idiot" Who Is Quietly M'aking

$300, $400--Even $500 Every Day On The Internet...WITHOUT Having Any Affiliate

Marketing Experience?

While The "Experts" Struggle To M'ake Money

Online...

In The Next 5 Minutes...As You Read Every

Word Of This Article...YOU Will Discover,

In A'mazing Step-By-Step Detail...How You Can

Easily Copy His System TODAY...


http://xxxxxx2000.net/gwizard


But You Might Be Wondering "Who the Hell is

This Guy? And Why Should I Listen To His advice

on How To become Rich through affiliate programs?"

So please, take a look right now at one of my

affiliate accounts from CLICKBANK...In this one

account, I m'ade over $36,000 in less than One

Month...


http://xxxxx2000.net/gwizard

==============================

Thank you for submitting your link to our xxx page.

If you wish to be d'eleted from this l'ist, please

go to http://xxxxxx2000.net/rmv and enter your

address alexhar@singnet.com.sg in the form.

--

No virus found in this incoming message.

Checked by AVG Free Edition.

Version: 7.5.432 / Virus Database: 268.17.12/655 - Release Date: 1/28/2007 1:12 PM

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